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[高考英语作文辅导] 2010年高考英语满分作文及评析

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发表于 2023-10-31 21:42:31 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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  实现有效的沟通,建立良好的人际关系,不仅要善于言表,更要学会倾听。请你根据下表中所提供的信息,写一篇题为 “Being a Good Listener” 的英文演讲稿。

  注意:

  1、对所给要点,逐一陈述,适当发挥,不要简单翻译。

  2、词数150左右。开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数。

  3、演讲稿中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名。

  Good afternoon, everyone.

  The topic of my speech today is “Being a Good Listener”.

  Good listening can always show respect, promote understanding, and improve interpersonal relationship.

  Many people suggest that parents should listen more to their children, so they will understand them better, and find it easy to narrow the generation gap; teachers should listen more to their students, then they can meet their needs better, and place themselves in a good relationship with their students; students should listen more to their classmates, thus they will help and learn from each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed.

  What I want to stress is that each of us should listen to others. Show your respect and never stop others till they finish their talk; show you are interested by a supportive silence or a knowing smile; be open-minded to different opinions even though you don’t like them. In a word, good listening can really enable us to get closer to each other.

  Thank you for your listening!

  【名师点评】

  这是一篇感情真挚、热情洋溢的演讲稿,文中大量运用排比句型,不但准确流畅地表达出题目中所提供的信息,而且体现出作者熟练运用英语的能力以及不俗的文采。第三段中所使用的相同结构的复合句式,将倾听的对象及其作用阐述得淋漓尽致;而第四段中用一系列的祈使句议论应如何倾听,则更进一步地增强了这篇演说稿的说服力。
 楼主| 发表于 2023-10-31 21:42:53 | 显示全部楼层
重点单词          
silence        ['sailəns]       
n. 沉默,寂静
vt. 使安静,使沉默

       
listener        ['lisənə]       
n. 听者,听众

       
stress        [stres]       
n. 紧张,压力
v. 强调,着重

       
understand        [.ʌndə'stænd]       
vt. 理解,懂,听说,获悉,将 ... 理解为,认为<

       
promote        [prə'məut]       
vt. 促进,提升,升迁; 发起; 促销
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